I'll take a short-cut. We'll take a short-cut yeah.
In your eyes (x4).
I come 'round (x4).
Running up to never come down.
Never a corner to see around.
I felt the taste of a lemon combined with.
With your eyes (x4).
I came down (x4).
Bright blue blurry summer sky.
You're a cloud.
There is a silence in the bonds between everyone.
I'd wished we wouldn't be such a generation gone.
Such a goner.
My control to grow old. Not like a tree or a stone.
A tree with so many leaves to just stay and leave.
Found in your eyes (x4).
They fall down (x4).
Smiles everywhere.
In your eyes.
Trying to find somebody who tries to care.
And take it apart.
Syntes denne her har rigtig meget potentiale!!! Men der mangler et overraskelsesmoment i melodien, noget der skubber lidt til en og får det til at krible i maven, bare noget der falder lidt uden for? Melodien er rigtig god, er mangler bare en twist!
SvarSletOkay.. jeg tager faktisk det jeg skrev tilbage :D nu når jeg har hørt den en masse gange er den faktisk lige i øjet. Ændrede lidt i nogle sætninger, du kan jo se hvad du syntes:
SvarSletThere is a silence in the bonds between everyone.
I'll take a short-cut. We'll take a short-cut yeah.
In your eyes (x4).
I’ll come around (x4).
Running up to never come down.
Never a corner to look around.
I felt the taste of a lemon combined with.
With your eyes (x4).
I came down (x4).
Bright blue blurry summer sky.
You're a cloud.
There is a silence in the bonds between everyone.
I'd wished we wouldn't be such a generation gone.
Such a goner.
My control has grown old. Not like a tree or a stone.
A tree with so many leaves to just decay and leave.
Found in your eyes (x4).
They fall down (x4).
Smiles everywhere.
In your eyes.
Trying to find somebody who actually care(s).
Who’ll make an effort.
Yeah man! Det var prikken over i'et. Jeg tænkte egentlig også på om der ikke var noget gramatisk ukorrekt ved den? Altså med nutid og datid og sådan....? Vi er nogle virkelig dygtige sangskrivere. Det mener jeg faktisk! Ved ikke hvad den handler om helt. Men nok noget om selv-realisering ligesom filmen på min facebook profil / En kærligheds sang. Det er bare fordi at jeg er så kunstnerisk, at jeg ikke ved hvad jeg laver, du ved;)
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